tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2869464170817632469.post4118992357481386017..comments2023-09-19T11:15:41.876-05:00Comments on Beyond the Veil ~ Paranormal Romance Authors: 13 Edits I Made In My Manuscript RecentlyJody W. and Meankittyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13733607365443126784noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2869464170817632469.post-81081777164149026542013-01-25T21:09:22.593-05:002013-01-25T21:09:22.593-05:00Oh. My. Gosh.
Laughed my head off.
I've had th...Oh. My. Gosh.<br />Laughed my head off.<br />I've had that same discussion in my head, well not exactly about the no-no licking, but the back and forth dialogue in my writer's brain. Leave in take out...to lick or not to lick...Kimberley Trouttehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15656793524069292791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2869464170817632469.post-61227288879847136162013-01-24T20:48:12.401-05:002013-01-24T20:48:12.401-05:00*spew*
When will I learn NOT to read your posts wh...*spew*<br />When will I learn NOT to read your posts when I'm drinking tea. Now I've got to clean the screen.<br />I'd have him lick. He's a guy. He would. And the heroine would never let him live it down. DJean Marie Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06549107203357246640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2869464170817632469.post-50267099214113966292013-01-24T14:33:42.130-05:002013-01-24T14:33:42.130-05:00Thank you for sharing your amusing inner workings ...Thank you for sharing your amusing inner workings with us all. ^_^ It's good to know I'm not the only one who argues with myself. >.< Angela N. Blount (RedPeril)https://www.blogger.com/profile/06701198374117476532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2869464170817632469.post-47593884243937141602013-01-24T14:11:44.881-05:002013-01-24T14:11:44.881-05:00LEAVE IT! I need to read it now. :) Never fear, yo...LEAVE IT! I need to read it now. :) Never fear, your never ending story will end soon. Missy Lyonshttp://www.missylyons.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2869464170817632469.post-89230588360642426822013-01-24T14:03:32.123-05:002013-01-24T14:03:32.123-05:00Oh, yeah, heroine would totally lose it if he were...Oh, yeah, heroine would totally lose it if he were to lick his no-no. I know I'm snorting up a storm here and I haven't even read the dang thing :)Cathy in AKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08667978358875270260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2869464170817632469.post-77997280452862697632013-01-24T13:56:44.903-05:002013-01-24T13:56:44.903-05:00OMG. So hilarious! I can't stop picturing the ...OMG. So hilarious! I can't stop picturing the hero licking his no-no! And I can't decide if you should leave it in because it's clever and good subterfuge and I can totally picture him being smug about his undercover abilities...or if you should take it out because all the other guys would be jealous because they want to be able to lick their no-nos, too.Natalie J. Damschroderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07800784042353921973noreply@blogger.com