06 June 2013
Some Like It Hot: What Makes A Love Scene Hot?
I think this is an interesting question because there's no one answer. What makes a scene hot depends on what the viewer finds hot. To a logophile, a well-crafted iambic pentameter might be just the thing. To a BDSM fan, maybe it's a St. Andrews Cross. To a cat fan, maybe it's a Siamese peach-point.
For me, the heat comes from the relationships and not necessarily the sex scene. I've read sex scenes that are all about the sex and nothing about the people and I don't find them hot. There's no investment in the payoff.
One of the hottest scenes I've read is in Zodiac by Neal Stephenson. There isn't even any sex in it. (Well, the sex comes next.) The two characters are trying to figure out why the car died, and they get oil on their fingers. Then they look at each other and realize the lubricant is sexy and slippery and...
What do you find hot? If you like M/M romance, or are interested in giving it a try, I have a new book coming out on July 23rd. Called TIGER TIGER, it's the sequel to BURNING BRIGHT. It's about a veterinarian and animal empath who falls in love with weretigers. It seems natural, within the flow of the story, and we worked hard to make the sex scenes part of the story. They move the plot forward.
What do you find hot?
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02 June 2013
Are you ready for some more shifter love???
One of the best things about
writing a series is letting the characters grow and expand, show the reader more
of what makes them tick. While the first book is usually all about the action
the second and continuing stories allow the author to show more of what the
characters are all about, what makes them either so lovable or
loathsome.
In "Blood of the Pride" I introduced you to Rebecca Desjardin, a
cat shifter who can't shift—outcast and shunned by her family until they need
her help. With a foot in both the Felis and human worlds she helped find a rogue
male and at the same time found love in a curious journalist named Brandon
Hanover who not only figures out what she is but loves her for it.
"Claws Bared", book two, was released this past January and
sent Reb down to a small town in Pennsylvania to help figure out who killed a
popular male stripper. During that adventure she and Brandon figured out where
they were going with their relationship and moved to the next level.
Now with "Family Pride", releasing June 3rd from Carina
Press, the intrepid cat shifter finds herself in dangerous new territory—dealing
with Brandon 's
family. It's one thing to meet the parents and find them wanting someone better
for their son, another to be forced into working for them in order to save your
own.
Here's a short excerpt from
"Family Pride"!
***
"My parents want to meet you."
I dropped the thick ceramic mug in the sink. It bounced once before landing in the inch-deep soapy water. The clanging sound bounced around my skull, settling behind my left eye and throbbing.
"Your parents are dead." I turned and leaned against the counter. "Are we attending a séance?"
Bran bit his lower lip. He hadn't bothered to put a shirt on, choosing to pad around my house barefoot in a pair of jeans that fit perfectly in all the right places. We'd finally dragged ourselves out of bed for lunch, ordering in pizza because we had run out of groceries.
His dark eyes met mine, apologetic and pleading.
"They're not, ah, dead. They're sort of alive."
I picked up the mug and contemplated how much strength it would take to smash it. "Your parents are zombies?"
"My parents are alive and well and very much human."
I weighed the mug in my palm, letting him watch my fingers curl around the cool clay. "You lied to me. Four months ago you lied to my face."
"Maybe." Bran put out his hand, pointing at the mug. "Please put that down."
I glared at him.
"Okay, I lied. A bit." His hand didn't move, still outstretched toward the mug. "I told you my parents were dead but that was right after we'd met and we were on opposite sides of the case." Bran smiled. "And I didn't know how good we could be together."
I didn't blink.
"Cut me a break, Reb. You've got your own family secrets." He shifted to one side with a grin, showing off his newest scratches on one shoulder. "And I can make you purr."
Damned redhead had a point. We'd both kept things from each other back then. I hadn't exactly been forthcoming about the fact that I wasn't human, but when Bran had come face-to-face with my Felis heritage I hadn't lied and denied.
I still didn't have to like it. "Who are they and why did you lie?"
He didn't move. My gaze traveled over his bare chest, resting on the fresh scars across his midsection courtesy of our latest work trip to
The least I could do was hear him out before throwing the mother of all temper tantrums.
"My father is Michael Hanover." Bran paused. "Of
I nearly dropped the mug.
"
"Yeah. Them." He sounded almost apologetic. "It's a family business. Three generations."
"You're related to those
"Michael and Bernadette Hanover are my parents." He reached out and took the mug from my numb fingers. "The reason I lied was because it'd become an instinctive reaction to explain away my wealth. Easier to say trust fund than explain my dysfunctional relationship with my parents." He shook his head, a sad smile on his lips. "You'd be surprised how many gold diggers are out there looking to snag a rich man. Or his son."
I tried to get my breathing under control. "Those
"We'd just met," Bran repeated. He placed the mug out of my reach and returned to stand in front of me, both hands up. "And I used the same line I use with everyone to explain my wealth. It was automatic."
***
While I don't think many of us
lied to our prospective mates about our family being dead, I think we can all
relate to Reb's shell shock at finding out who the Hanovers are—and when she
finds out how dangerous they are it'll force her to make decisions that will
change her life and her relationship with both families and Brandon
forever.
I hope you'll come along for
the latest book in the series and get to know Brandon and Rebecca better—after
all, there's still plenty of mysteries for them to find and solve!
On another note I'll be
appearing from June 12th to the 16th at the Origins Game Fair as
part of the Library track – if you're in the Columbus , Ohio area and looking for a great way to spend
a day or five, please check out the schedule! I'll be there discussing
superheroes and romance writing along with many great authors such as Timothy
Zahn and Michael Stackpole and there'll be plenty of great books for sale along
with some faboo gaming opportunities.
If you're in the area it'd be
great to see you!
31 May 2013
When Good Ideas go Bad and Then Good Again
Our theme this month has been about how the best ideas can
go bad and because this month has an extra Friday, I get to go again!
In early 2012 Ellora’s Cave put out their list of sub calls, one
of which was for tattoo themed books. I came up with an idea for four linked
fantasy books revolving around the Midnight Café, a tattoo parlor in the world
beyond the Veil, where all the characters of myth and legends reside. They were
to be short novellas, and I had just over a month to get them written. I could
do it. I was sure of it. I told my family I’d be pretty much unavailable for
the next six weeks and hunkered down.
Then, in February our son Tom was in a horrendous auto
accident* and everything, of course, got shoved aside. Thank heavens although
he was terribly hurt we were assured he would eventually make a full recovery. And
despite not having much time, I found writing therapeutic and actually cranked
out two of the three novellas I’d planned, Fleeing Fate and Stone-Hard Passion,
and they were released as part of the Pricked series.
HA! I won’t claim the book flowed, because I struggled to
get it finished—real life again—but once I got that point worked out, I knew
exactly how the book was to go and Dragon's Claim, book three in my Unveiled Seductions series came to life.
I’ve had my fair share of ‘The Best Book Idea Ever!’ turning into ‘What
the Hell was I thinking??’. Sometimes it’s been the plot, sometimes the
characters, even extenuating circumstances (aka real life) but, in reality, it’s
all me. They’re my ideas and, whoa Nellie, if they don’t turn out then who can I
blame but myself? But it's not the end of the world, or even the end of the story.
Here’s a “for instance.”
In early 2012 Ellora’s Cave put out their list of sub calls, one
of which was for tattoo themed books. I came up with an idea for four linked
fantasy books revolving around the Midnight Café, a tattoo parlor in the world
beyond the Veil, where all the characters of myth and legends reside. They were
to be short novellas, and I had just over a month to get them written. I could
do it. I was sure of it. I told my family I’d be pretty much unavailable for
the next six weeks and hunkered down.
Then, in February our son Tom was in a horrendous auto
accident* and everything, of course, got shoved aside. Thank heavens although
he was terribly hurt we were assured he would eventually make a full recovery. And
despite not having much time, I found writing therapeutic and actually cranked
out two of the three novellas I’d planned, Fleeing Fate and Stone-Hard Passion,
and they were released as part of the Pricked series.
Fast forward to June and things have settled down. I pull
out the outline for book three and decide to get on with it. The plot involves
a dragon shifter and Lady Luck, who’s a Fey woman. I write, hit delete, write
some more, delete some more. It’s like pulling teeth. By now I think I must
have been on crack when I decided this story had legs. Then it stuck me…The Fey
woman actually should be a Fey man…
HA! I won’t claim the book flowed, because I struggled to
get it finished—real life again—but once I got that point worked out, I knew
exactly how the book was to go and Dragon's Claim, book three in my Unveiled Seductions series came to life.
So, for me I’ve found sometimes it’s a matter of finding the
stumbling block and tearing through it to turn a bad idea into something I can
love.
*My son Tom’s accident was caused by his Type One Diabetes,
which he’s had since he was four years old. In a rush to get to work one
morning, running late, he fixed himself breakfast to go and jumped into his
car. Unfortunately he didn’t eat quickly enough and his blood sugar dropped. He
doesn’t remember anything about what happened next, but the end result was the
accident.
They don’t know what causes Type One Diabetes and there is
no cure. Every year the Brenda Novak Auction raises funds for research into Type One
Diabetes and it is an awesome way to help, as well as get some wicked deals on
all kinds of cool stuff. By the time you read this the auction may be over for
this year (May 31st is the last day) but if not, go and take a look and get a last minute deal. If it’s too late this year, make sure to check it out
next year!
30 May 2013
Thursday Thirteen: 13 Photos from Balticon '13
Technically, my next blog is June 1, the start of "Some Like it Hot" month here at Beyond the Veil. Since none of the stories I'm working on fall into that category, I figured I should cogitate on the subject a bit more.Instead, I offer a Thursday Thirteen of photos from Balticon 47, held in Hunt Valley, Maryland last weekend. Enjoy!
It wouldn't be Balticon Friday without some Dancing in the Gears, the annual Steampunk ball featuring 19th century dances.
Author Stephanie Burke shows off her Steampunk finery.
Panel moderator Becca Davis (left) and former wrestler Nate Nelson instruct attendees in the finer points of not killing each other in the Stage Combat Workshop. If you think it looks a lot like pro wrestling...you're right!
Two pairs of attendees at the Stage Combat Workshop learn the finer points of pretending to lead a subdued opponent around the room. In fact, the person in the head lock is doing the leading.
Meanwhile, there was belly-dancing in the halls.
And splendid costumes. My only regret is I didn't get to this year's Masquerade.
Steampunk was definitely the style of choice. Here Hildy Silverman, the publisher of Space and Time, gives it a ninja spin.
Guest of Honor Joe Haldeman and his lovely wife Gay, one of the nicest people in the SF community.
Dark Quest Books editor Danielle Ackley-McPhail (second from left) and some of Dark Quest's more melodious authors celebrate dames at the Dark Quest Mega-Launch Party.
Filker and Dark Quest author Danny Birt tries to learn the lyrics on the fly, while playing guitar. Kids, don't try this at home.
Of course, a little thing like mental safety wouldn't stop our own Christine Norris, Dark Quest's newest acquisition editor. And yes, folks, she's acquiring. You can see the post here.
SF erotica icon Cecilia Tan just before our Buzzy Mag interview. I think this was the only serious second in the the whole talk, which covered everything from writing for teen magazines to baseball to David Bowie--well, you knew we had to get space aliens in there somehow.
And in closing, the Motorcycle Fairy. How do you top that?
Well I guess you could check out my Flickr page for the rest of the photos. Enjoy!
Jean Marie Ward
Ideas Are Never Wasted
"I'm still big, it's the pictures that got small." --Norma Desmond, Sunset Boulevard.
In Sunset Boulevard, aging film star Norma Desmond has an idea for a comeback, an idea so awesome that she's convinced it will only take tweaking by a good screenwriter to make it perfect.
The key to this classic movie is that Norma is partially right. She's still a fascinating, vital women and should still be in pictures. But she's wrong as well, refusing to accept that her one brilliant idea can never bring back the life that was.
She's so deluded that even after murdering the person who was supposed to be her savior, she retreats further into her fantasy world, becoming the part she wanted to play when the cameras show up. "I'm ready for my close-up," she declares, having permanently taken up residence in fantasy. That fantasy is so strong and so comforting and reality so harsh, that it's hard to blame her. Even Joe Gillis (William Holden), gives her a pass. He, of course, regrets it.
Sometimes I feel like Norma, hanging onto an idea so tightly that it's impossible to know whether the belief in that idea or story is an utter fantasy, a delusion so big that it allows no room for reality to intrude.
Writing has no box scores, no bottom line that defines success or failure. Publishing does, of course, and that's measured it in sales dollars, but, as with any art, sales dollars aren't always the best measure of overall success.
I choose to be positive about ideas that don't work out, as part of my 10,000 hours of practice toward getting decent as writing.
My one big idea that hasn't worked out so far is to write a paranormal with a ghost hunter and two psychics hunting a mad scientist vampire. The original concept was to pair two women and one guy, since I'd been seeing so many romantic threesomes with two girls and a girl and I thought I'd mix it up. Well, turns out the reason the reason two guys and a girl is a more popular threesome is because it's more likely to be a female fantasy.
Oops.
Luckily, this revelation occurred only about 10,000 words into the book. So I swapped out Tammy for Rhys and I wrote the rest of it. In first person. For 80,000 words.
And at the end of the book, I liked the plot, the villain, and the two guys. I didn't like my narrator, my heroine, at all. And I didn't like the first person narration.
Oops again.
It turns out, unlike many authors who write in first person, that point of view distances me from my characters. When I write in third person, I feel like I'm riding with them as the story happens. When I write in first person, I feel like I'm sitting in front of a fire with my narrator and they're telling me a story, rather than me experiencing the story along with them.
So, rewrite needed. Back to third person. For all 80,000 words.
Still didn't work. ARGH.
I'd learned a lot about how to write psychic elements and how they combine with sex and a lot about writing a younger male character, and a lot about ghosts. But it was the first book that I just didn't feel I should even try to sell.
I put it aside.
I started writing something new, superheroes, and the Phoenix Institute series was born. The first book, Phoenix Rising, featured a young male hero. With psychic abilities such as telekinesis and firestarting that were not completely under his control. It also featured a heroine whose own abilities responded to the hero's.
In other words, elements from my failed idea. Younger hero. Check. Psychic abilities that needed some work. Check. Combination of psychic powers and sex. Check.
Phoenix Rising has been my biggest seller to date and it keeps selling.
So was the paranormal featuring the mad scientist vampire as the villain a failure or a bad idea? Nah. I just needed to practice first.
I've since gone back to the ghost hunter threesome story and rewritten it and it features a narrator I enjoy now. I noticed this week that a publisher was looking for a modern gothic, which is mostly what that so-called "failed book" is.
So I've concluded Norma Desmond was right. It wasn't the idea that was bad. It was the writing that got small.
And small writing?
It takes time, patience and energy but I can fix that.
Corrina Lawson is a writer, mom, geek and superhero. Most of the time. :) You can find out more about her books at www.corrina-lawson.com
In Sunset Boulevard, aging film star Norma Desmond has an idea for a comeback, an idea so awesome that she's convinced it will only take tweaking by a good screenwriter to make it perfect.
The key to this classic movie is that Norma is partially right. She's still a fascinating, vital women and should still be in pictures. But she's wrong as well, refusing to accept that her one brilliant idea can never bring back the life that was.
| Gloria Swanson explains it all to William Holden in Sunset Boulevard |
Sometimes I feel like Norma, hanging onto an idea so tightly that it's impossible to know whether the belief in that idea or story is an utter fantasy, a delusion so big that it allows no room for reality to intrude.
Writing has no box scores, no bottom line that defines success or failure. Publishing does, of course, and that's measured it in sales dollars, but, as with any art, sales dollars aren't always the best measure of overall success.
I choose to be positive about ideas that don't work out, as part of my 10,000 hours of practice toward getting decent as writing.
My one big idea that hasn't worked out so far is to write a paranormal with a ghost hunter and two psychics hunting a mad scientist vampire. The original concept was to pair two women and one guy, since I'd been seeing so many romantic threesomes with two girls and a girl and I thought I'd mix it up. Well, turns out the reason the reason two guys and a girl is a more popular threesome is because it's more likely to be a female fantasy.
Oops.
Luckily, this revelation occurred only about 10,000 words into the book. So I swapped out Tammy for Rhys and I wrote the rest of it. In first person. For 80,000 words.
And at the end of the book, I liked the plot, the villain, and the two guys. I didn't like my narrator, my heroine, at all. And I didn't like the first person narration.
Oops again.
It turns out, unlike many authors who write in first person, that point of view distances me from my characters. When I write in third person, I feel like I'm riding with them as the story happens. When I write in first person, I feel like I'm sitting in front of a fire with my narrator and they're telling me a story, rather than me experiencing the story along with them.
So, rewrite needed. Back to third person. For all 80,000 words.
Still didn't work. ARGH.
I'd learned a lot about how to write psychic elements and how they combine with sex and a lot about writing a younger male character, and a lot about ghosts. But it was the first book that I just didn't feel I should even try to sell.
I put it aside.
I started writing something new, superheroes, and the Phoenix Institute series was born. The first book, Phoenix Rising, featured a young male hero. With psychic abilities such as telekinesis and firestarting that were not completely under his control. It also featured a heroine whose own abilities responded to the hero's.
In other words, elements from my failed idea. Younger hero. Check. Psychic abilities that needed some work. Check. Combination of psychic powers and sex. Check.
Phoenix Rising has been my biggest seller to date and it keeps selling.
So was the paranormal featuring the mad scientist vampire as the villain a failure or a bad idea? Nah. I just needed to practice first.
I've since gone back to the ghost hunter threesome story and rewritten it and it features a narrator I enjoy now. I noticed this week that a publisher was looking for a modern gothic, which is mostly what that so-called "failed book" is.
So I've concluded Norma Desmond was right. It wasn't the idea that was bad. It was the writing that got small.
And small writing?
It takes time, patience and energy but I can fix that.
Corrina Lawson is a writer, mom, geek and superhero. Most of the time. :) You can find out more about her books at www.corrina-lawson.com
29 May 2013
Dark Quest Books
I’ve been hinting around that there was to be a big announcement, that I’ve been making changes in my writing career. I couldn’t tell anyone officially until after Balticon, when we made the public announcement at the Dark Quest launch party.
There’s a whole big story behind this, but long story short.
Dark Quest Books, an independent SF/F/H publisher (yes, the website is out of date, it’s on of the things on the ever-growing to-do list.) is opening a Young Adult imprint, Palomino Press. Here is the shiny new logo:
And I am the Acquisitions Editor. Yes, me. I know, right? The first release from this new imprint will come out in the Fall – The Unexpected Enlightenment of Rachel Griffin, by L. Jagi Lamplighter, who is the author of the Prospero's Daughter series, from TOR, and an all around nice lady. This will be a multiple book series.
So, we have six (JUST SIX) slots left to fill for the imprint for 2014-15. Right now we’re accepting submissions. THESE ARE THE GUIDELINES:
*YA ONLY (no middle grade), we’re aiming for 15-19 year old readers (and crossover with the adult readers who read YA, of course).
*65,000-100,000 words
*Speculative Fiction ONLY (SF/F/H)
Other than those three things, pretty much anything goes!
*Contemporary, Historical, Alternate Universe, Futuristic, Dystopian, Steampunk all welcome!
*Romantic elements are certainly acceptable, but should be secondary to the plot.
*Especially looking for sharp, original YA voice (think Cassandra Claire, Kady Cross, Lauren Oliver, Jennifer Armentrout, Suzanne Collins).
I know what I want for this imprint, now I just have to find it! If you think you’ve got the perfect manuscript, please submit a query letter, the first three chapters, and a 1-2 page synopsis to me at palomino@darkquestbooks.com. Please do NOT email my personal email — it will be deleted. Snail mail queries will not be accepted.
27 May 2013
Memorial Day in the US
Today is a special, poignant day in the United States. It is the day that we honor our fallen heroes with remembrance and praise.
Strong and brave, these young men and women paid the ultimate price so that the rest of us can live. I am able to raise my children in a country that respects freedoms, dreams and happiness because of the sacrifices others have made. There are no words or feelings great enough to describe how grateful I am.
So I will simply say thank you.
Thank you to those who have died for this great land.
Thank you to the families who have lost their precious loved ones to save us all.
Thank you to those of you who are willing to fight for the rights and lives we all cherish and hold dear.
My love to you each one of you.
Kimberley Troutte
www.kimberleytroutte.com
Strong and brave, these young men and women paid the ultimate price so that the rest of us can live. I am able to raise my children in a country that respects freedoms, dreams and happiness because of the sacrifices others have made. There are no words or feelings great enough to describe how grateful I am.
So I will simply say thank you.
Thank you to those who have died for this great land.
Thank you to the families who have lost their precious loved ones to save us all.
Thank you to those of you who are willing to fight for the rights and lives we all cherish and hold dear.
My love to you each one of you.
Kimberley Troutte
www.kimberleytroutte.com
26 May 2013
When good ideas just aren't the right fit...
I'm working on a Steampunk novel and I have all the pieces in place to just go to town. I picked my setting, location, time period, steampunk itmes. It was all ready to go and then I went to RT. I learned two things:
1) Steampunk is a slow growing readership.
2) Your story needs to stand out.
Learning these two things changed the direction of my story. Despite the popularity of Steampunk, the readership isn't there...WHAT? Don't readers know I have a story they will love? Maybe steampunk fans are a skeptical lot, and don't want to take a chance on a new auther.
Maybe they like all the books written before they read them. I had one book plotted not two. Apparently Steampunk fans need series. This changed my concept of writing the novel. I always write strong secondary characters in order to create series because I've found that readers like going back to worlds created. However, that being said I watch my sales to see which books are doing better and put books selling better on a faster timetable than those that do not. Clearly if I wrote this novel I would have to change my way of thinking.
I pitched my story and setting to an editor who was clearly confused and realized that my story wasn't unique enough. I set it in London and it was clearly not standing out enough so I changed the location to Istanbul. I also took the time to plot out all the changes to my altered timeline and came up with a second story idea, which changed my title from "Gunns, Cleaver & Brass Pacaderms" to "The Courtesan of Constantinople" Here's the two blurbs, tell me which one you like better:
1) Steampunk is a slow growing readership.
2) Your story needs to stand out.
Learning these two things changed the direction of my story. Despite the popularity of Steampunk, the readership isn't there...WHAT? Don't readers know I have a story they will love? Maybe steampunk fans are a skeptical lot, and don't want to take a chance on a new auther.
Maybe they like all the books written before they read them. I had one book plotted not two. Apparently Steampunk fans need series. This changed my concept of writing the novel. I always write strong secondary characters in order to create series because I've found that readers like going back to worlds created. However, that being said I watch my sales to see which books are doing better and put books selling better on a faster timetable than those that do not. Clearly if I wrote this novel I would have to change my way of thinking.
I pitched my story and setting to an editor who was clearly confused and realized that my story wasn't unique enough. I set it in London and it was clearly not standing out enough so I changed the location to Istanbul. I also took the time to plot out all the changes to my altered timeline and came up with a second story idea, which changed my title from "Gunns, Cleaver & Brass Pacaderms" to "The Courtesan of Constantinople" Here's the two blurbs, tell me which one you like better:
Cleaver, Gunn’s & Brass Pacaderms
Laurel Gunn run’s one of England ’s most notorious brothel’s. Following her husband’s death on the Crimean battle field she was taken away to a desert harem. There she learned the art of love and men’s desire.
Lt. Aaron March rescued Laurel and brought her back to London . He never expected her undying love to get in the way of their romance. He hoped to have her as his wife rather than his mistress. Yet, Aaron’s love is stronger than death.
Death is around every corner as prostitutes are being killed by a maniac known as “The Cleaver”. Laurel is drawn into the mystery as one of her girls is found dead. Scotland Yard has a suspect, Dr. Benjamin Gunn.
Ben Gunn returns from the war to find his wife in the arms of another man and accused of killing London ’s working girls. Ben has a secret – he’s no longer human and has moments where he blacks out.
The Cleaver chooses a victim both men love, Laurel . Can Aaron save her? Can Ben learn to control his inner beast? Find out in “Cleaver, Gunn’s & Brass Pacaderms”.
OR
The Courtesan of Constantinople
It has been twelve years since Britain and France lost the Crimean war. The Holy Alliance has granted the Ottoman Empire continued rule over its lands if it shares the port of Constantinople . Constantinople is a global city of power, politics and prostitution.
Laurel Gunn runs “All the Queen’s Women” a bordello catering to the elite members of The Embassy - a powerhouse of politicians from all over the globe. Besides meeting a courtesan for an evening of dalliance, you can also meet fellow politicians for a drink or perhaps some espionage.
Amidst the spys, an impending rebellion looms and a man known as “The Cleaver” is killing prostitutes including the women who work in her establishment. Laurel must learn who to trust among the men in her life: Lt. Aaron March –the man who saved her from the Sultan’s harem; Inspector Raven Lark – a man with secrets, who craves justice; or Dr. Benjamin Gunn – her husband, a man she watched die, whose arrival following the death of the first girl is suspicious.
Laurel Gunn has survived her overbearing father, The Crimean War and a Sultan’s harem. She’s not to let “The Cleaver” get away with murder. After all – who brings a Cleaver to a Gunn fight?
I loved the first story idea but the second one opened up more options for me. Thank the stars, I wasn't knee deep into the story....
~Tina
17 May 2013
Ugh, did I write that?
Good ideas do go bad.
I remember the first 'review' I received regarding Camille from DREAM WALK was not so stunning. I wanted a vulnerable heroine who had been kicked around by life and still had to stand on her own two feet. That's what I thought I wrote. Apparently my first scenes were not up to par. A kind but blunt critique partner told me: "Your heroine is a wimp."
Ouch! But she was right. And luckily, it was early enough in the story that I didn't have to tweak too much to make her a more palatable character. I managed to turn my shy, scared heroine into a woman who could kick butt when needed. Oh, she was still shy. She still jumped at shadows and really did not want to talk to the dead. She wanted to run and hide. But she faced her problems -- and her demon and her hero -- head-on.
From this experience I learned that a story being good or bad is most often in the execution of the details. So from now on, we I discover a good idea seems to be falling flat, I ask myself: "Is it really bad or am I just writing it that way?" and "How can I tell?"
Simple. Ask someone I trust to read it and tell me what they think. Or put it aside for a bit, go back to it with fresh eyes. If I find myself groaning out loud, then I know it's time to either scrap it or begin again.
Ugh. Beginning again is really not fun. But that is part of what this art is about: doing it over until you get it right.
Meg Allison
www.megallisonauthor.com
I remember the first 'review' I received regarding Camille from DREAM WALK was not so stunning. I wanted a vulnerable heroine who had been kicked around by life and still had to stand on her own two feet. That's what I thought I wrote. Apparently my first scenes were not up to par. A kind but blunt critique partner told me: "Your heroine is a wimp."
Ouch! But she was right. And luckily, it was early enough in the story that I didn't have to tweak too much to make her a more palatable character. I managed to turn my shy, scared heroine into a woman who could kick butt when needed. Oh, she was still shy. She still jumped at shadows and really did not want to talk to the dead. She wanted to run and hide. But she faced her problems -- and her demon and her hero -- head-on.
From this experience I learned that a story being good or bad is most often in the execution of the details. So from now on, we I discover a good idea seems to be falling flat, I ask myself: "Is it really bad or am I just writing it that way?" and "How can I tell?"
Simple. Ask someone I trust to read it and tell me what they think. Or put it aside for a bit, go back to it with fresh eyes. If I find myself groaning out loud, then I know it's time to either scrap it or begin again.
Ugh. Beginning again is really not fun. But that is part of what this art is about: doing it over until you get it right.
Meg Allison
www.megallisonauthor.com
16 May 2013
If You Give A Kid A Camera...
Recently, as in yesterday, I had to perform that painful authorial duty that happens to so many of us -- I had to get new headshots. Accompanying me to meet the professional photographer at our chosen outdoor locations were my sister and her 20 month old daughter.
Now my sister is a careful mom who's doing a great job with her kiddo. One thing she does so she can be that careful mom is to make a certain allowance in a certain situation in order to preserve her own sanity. By that oh so descriptive sentence, I mean she has a childproofed old iPoon she lets the baby play with in the car. The iPoon's name is Carl.
Baby has found the camera function on the iPoon. So I thought I'd share some of baby's art on the way to and from my photography appointment. Keep in mind these are merely a small sampling of the images we found on the camera.
1. Shoes!
2. Something fleshy.
3. Baby hair.
4. No more shoes!
5. A gingham toy.
6. A leg.
7. Two legs and a foot.
8. Oooh, nice foot.
9. I need a drink from the sippy cup. Hold on, Carl.
10. I lost my purple shoes somewhere....new shoes!
11. Caspar the friendly Megablox ghost.
12. Mr. Moto Monkey
13. Baby :)
What does this have to do with writing paranormal and this month's topic of finding writing ideas or when good ideas go bad? Not much, actually. My sister's idea of letting the kid play with the old iPoon isn't bad SO far! And maybe one day Baby will take some pictures that lend themselves to a story...that reveal the perpetrator of a crime...or a shapeshifting alien....except Baby isn't saying much yet, and all we'd have to solve the mystery are 208 photos of almost exactly the same thing.
Jody Wallace
Author, Cat Person, Amigurumist
http://www.jodywallace.com * http://www.meankitty.com
Now my sister is a careful mom who's doing a great job with her kiddo. One thing she does so she can be that careful mom is to make a certain allowance in a certain situation in order to preserve her own sanity. By that oh so descriptive sentence, I mean she has a childproofed old iPoon she lets the baby play with in the car. The iPoon's name is Carl.
Baby has found the camera function on the iPoon. So I thought I'd share some of baby's art on the way to and from my photography appointment. Keep in mind these are merely a small sampling of the images we found on the camera.
1. Shoes!
2. Something fleshy.
3. Baby hair.
4. No more shoes!
5. A gingham toy.
6. A leg.
7. Two legs and a foot.
8. Oooh, nice foot.
9. I need a drink from the sippy cup. Hold on, Carl.
11. Caspar the friendly Megablox ghost.
12. Mr. Moto Monkey
13. Baby :)
What does this have to do with writing paranormal and this month's topic of finding writing ideas or when good ideas go bad? Not much, actually. My sister's idea of letting the kid play with the old iPoon isn't bad SO far! And maybe one day Baby will take some pictures that lend themselves to a story...that reveal the perpetrator of a crime...or a shapeshifting alien....except Baby isn't saying much yet, and all we'd have to solve the mystery are 208 photos of almost exactly the same thing.
Jody Wallace
Author, Cat Person, Amigurumist
http://www.jodywallace.com * http://www.meankitty.com
13 May 2013
When Old Ideas Turn Into New Books
For once, I'm able to contribute to this month's theme! The book I'm finalizing at the moment - Tales of the Were: Grif - started off as an idea way back in 2005 or so. I wrote a good portion of it - probably somewhere around 30,000 words or more - and then let it sit while I did other things.
Maybe I got "stuck". Maybe I just got busy with dragons or aliens or whatever. I can't really recall anymore. Suffice to say, the book sat. And sat. And SAT. Unloved. Unfinished. Unfortunate.
But always in the back of my mind, there were these characters and this situation. A werecougar Alpha who had just sustained terrible loss in his family, and his little sister, both seeking the solace of the mountains to try to heal. And a woman. A human who knew about shapeshifters, who had a debt of family honor to settle.
I wrote about them in other books. I used members of the werecougar family in other stories, all the while knowing there was this older brother out there and all this tragedy in the family's past. I knew these people. I wanted so badly to finish their story, but after so much time had passed, I really wasn't sure how to go about it.
Then, last Christmas, I started self-publishing some of my paranormal stories. The first was Tales of the Were: Rocky, a novella I had written for an anthology call years before. The story was ultimately turned down and my editor at the time wanted me to expand it into a novel. I never quite got around to it before that editor left and I had this great story sitting on my hard drive for years.
I finally polished it up and added to it. I turned it into the story I had really wanted to write originally, but was constrained by the terms of the anthology call to change. I gave Rocky new life and sent him out there, into the world, to see what people might think of my werebear creation.
The response was like nothing I ever expected.
I had figured on just self-publishing the story for my own enjoyment. And maybe for those few, die-hard fans who might like to know where Rocky - a character who had a bit of a cameo role in my book Lords of the Were - had come from and what had happened to him after we first meet him in Lords.
Rocky's book led to a new character. A mysterious shifter named Slade. I was enchanted by him and wanted to know more about him. I sat down and wrote his story in January and February, then published it in March of this year as Tales of the Were: Slade. He was an entirely new character who had come from that "old" book about Rocky.
And then I started to realize how I might circle back around to Griffon Redstone - the werecougar Alpha I had started to write about so many years ago. I finally understood how and where his story fit in among the others I had been writing all this time. Not only that, but I realized where his brothers' stories fit as well.
And now I've started work on a 5-book sub-series of werecougar tales revolving around the Redstone Clan of cougar shifters. The first story - the one I started work on all those years ago - will be out later this month and is called Tales of the Were: Grif (Redstone Clan #1). I know that's a bit of a mouthful, but I'm not sure how else to clarify that this story fits firmly under the Tales of the Were series, but is part of its own little sub-series of 5 stories - one for each brother in the Redstone family.
The first book is, of course, about Grif, the eldest of the five brothers. It is the same story I began so long ago, but I finally know how to end it! There will be other books, later this year, for Mag and his vampire mate, Steve, Bobcat, and the ever-popular Matt, who was also featured in my book Sweeter Than Wine.
It's been a long time coming, but I feel like I'm finally on the track to fulfilling the promise of that story I began writing so long ago. The old idea is new and the "new" ideas that helped me finally finish this story have made it blossom into something I never really expected. I hope you'll enjoy the ride as much as I will!
Tales of the Were: Grif will be releasing in ebook in late May on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and Smashwords. It will release in print in June. Look for it to arrive on iTunes, Kobo, and other fine ebook and print retail sites mid-June. For more information, please visit www.biancadarc.com.
Maybe I got "stuck". Maybe I just got busy with dragons or aliens or whatever. I can't really recall anymore. Suffice to say, the book sat. And sat. And SAT. Unloved. Unfinished. Unfortunate.
But always in the back of my mind, there were these characters and this situation. A werecougar Alpha who had just sustained terrible loss in his family, and his little sister, both seeking the solace of the mountains to try to heal. And a woman. A human who knew about shapeshifters, who had a debt of family honor to settle.
I wrote about them in other books. I used members of the werecougar family in other stories, all the while knowing there was this older brother out there and all this tragedy in the family's past. I knew these people. I wanted so badly to finish their story, but after so much time had passed, I really wasn't sure how to go about it.
Then, last Christmas, I started self-publishing some of my paranormal stories. The first was Tales of the Were: Rocky, a novella I had written for an anthology call years before. The story was ultimately turned down and my editor at the time wanted me to expand it into a novel. I never quite got around to it before that editor left and I had this great story sitting on my hard drive for years.
I finally polished it up and added to it. I turned it into the story I had really wanted to write originally, but was constrained by the terms of the anthology call to change. I gave Rocky new life and sent him out there, into the world, to see what people might think of my werebear creation.
The response was like nothing I ever expected.
I had figured on just self-publishing the story for my own enjoyment. And maybe for those few, die-hard fans who might like to know where Rocky - a character who had a bit of a cameo role in my book Lords of the Were - had come from and what had happened to him after we first meet him in Lords.
Rocky's book led to a new character. A mysterious shifter named Slade. I was enchanted by him and wanted to know more about him. I sat down and wrote his story in January and February, then published it in March of this year as Tales of the Were: Slade. He was an entirely new character who had come from that "old" book about Rocky.
And then I started to realize how I might circle back around to Griffon Redstone - the werecougar Alpha I had started to write about so many years ago. I finally understood how and where his story fit in among the others I had been writing all this time. Not only that, but I realized where his brothers' stories fit as well.
And now I've started work on a 5-book sub-series of werecougar tales revolving around the Redstone Clan of cougar shifters. The first story - the one I started work on all those years ago - will be out later this month and is called Tales of the Were: Grif (Redstone Clan #1). I know that's a bit of a mouthful, but I'm not sure how else to clarify that this story fits firmly under the Tales of the Were series, but is part of its own little sub-series of 5 stories - one for each brother in the Redstone family.
It's been a long time coming, but I feel like I'm finally on the track to fulfilling the promise of that story I began writing so long ago. The old idea is new and the "new" ideas that helped me finally finish this story have made it blossom into something I never really expected. I hope you'll enjoy the ride as much as I will!
Tales of the Were: Grif will be releasing in ebook in late May on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and Smashwords. It will release in print in June. Look for it to arrive on iTunes, Kobo, and other fine ebook and print retail sites mid-June. For more information, please visit www.biancadarc.com.
12 May 2013
Pretty, pretty
I know this month's theme is when good ideas go bad, but since meeting deadline at the end of April I'm afraid my brain is a useless pile of goo.
Maybe it wasn't such a good idea to pull SO many all nighters and early mornings.
I'm so distracted. Easily distracted lately as my brain re-gels into whatever state it was in prior to meeting the Harlequin deadline, so I thought I'd share this pretty, pretty with you! Another bear shifter book!
Oh, so very pretty.
It's the sequel to Mounted Release and it's coming out June 7, 2013. YAY!
Here's a blurb:
Jared Stevens hasn’t been the same since he was shot. His duty is to marry a
Mukswa woman and be a strong leader. He lets the elders of his clan choose his bride,
because the woman he wants is only in his fantasies, the only woman who brings him to
exquisite release.
Adele Banks loved being a Mountie, but one shot ended her career and altered
her world forever. Adele is determined to make a life for herself. She’s hired to recover
Beare Enterprises embezzled funds, but what she didn’t count on is being extremely
attracted to her client when meeting him for the first time as he’s naked in his shower.
Adele is Jared’s mystery woman, but she’s taboo. He bonds to her, but has to keep
his society secret, as much as he wants to mark her as his own.
As Jared fights his own inner beast, remnants of the prior chief’s wrath is affecting
the clan and Adele. To save Adele’s life, Jared may just have to betray his clan’s secret
and risk his heart.
A Romantica® paranormal erotic romance from Ellora’s Cave
Maybe it wasn't such a good idea to pull SO many all nighters and early mornings.
I'm so distracted. Easily distracted lately as my brain re-gels into whatever state it was in prior to meeting the Harlequin deadline, so I thought I'd share this pretty, pretty with you! Another bear shifter book!
Oh, so very pretty.
It's the sequel to Mounted Release and it's coming out June 7, 2013. YAY!
Here's a blurb:
Jared Stevens hasn’t been the same since he was shot. His duty is to marry a
Mukswa woman and be a strong leader. He lets the elders of his clan choose his bride,
because the woman he wants is only in his fantasies, the only woman who brings him to
exquisite release.
Adele Banks loved being a Mountie, but one shot ended her career and altered
her world forever. Adele is determined to make a life for herself. She’s hired to recover
Beare Enterprises embezzled funds, but what she didn’t count on is being extremely
attracted to her client when meeting him for the first time as he’s naked in his shower.
Adele is Jared’s mystery woman, but she’s taboo. He bonds to her, but has to keep
his society secret, as much as he wants to mark her as his own.
As Jared fights his own inner beast, remnants of the prior chief’s wrath is affecting
the clan and Adele. To save Adele’s life, Jared may just have to betray his clan’s secret
and risk his heart.
A Romantica® paranormal erotic romance from Ellora’s Cave
09 May 2013
When Good Ideas Go Bad
It's relaxing.
Art is therapeutic.
Knitting is easy.
I tried learning to knit many times throughout the years, since I've wanted to knit since I was a child. My first experience with knitting was with a K-Tel Knitter, something you can't even find anymore and, oddly, the company won't allow any instructions to be posted - so if you do still have a K-Tel Knitter, good luck figuring out how to use the blasted thing!
Thankfully, crafters are a little obsessed and I noticed many more resources this time when I went looking than the last time, which was when I actually wanted to use my K-Tel Knitter. Irony, thy name is craft.
Or, cat. Depends on your point of view, especially if you craft in a house with cats.
Needless to say, I could not figure out knitting from a book. It took me a lot of years of frustration before I learned I have a learning style where I don't translate 3-D to 2-D and vice versa. I am a kinesthetic learner, which means I learn by doing, and I need to have someone show me things. I took my first knitting class in 2000 and POOF! INSTANT YARN ADDICT!
I started Knoontime Knitting in March of 2008, just after I started my main blog. I wanted to explore this thing called "three dimensions" since apparently, I live there. An amazing thing started to happen - I wanted to knit everything! I wasn't alone, either. There's even a style of graffiti called "yarn bombing", where people put knitting in public places in unexpected ways.
d00d. How can you resist the pom-pom? BWAHAHAHAHAHA.
I started taking weaving classes a couple years ago and haven't looked back, with the exception of a sad year where I couldn't afford to go because I was between jobs. (Don't recommend doing that, it's not very fun.) But I love weaving and have made some amazing things.
The biggest thing crafts have taught me, though, is that anyone that says they're easy and relaxing and anyone can do it...
Yeah, they're totally right. It's a ball. On a stick. You should try it.
Who knows? You might end up with the ranks of us fiber addicts. "Hello, my name is A. Catherine Noon and I'm a knitter."
“It takes courage to grow up and become who you really are.”
- E.E. Cummings
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- E.E. Cummings
My links: Blog | Website | Facebook | Twitter | Goodreads | Amazon | LinkedIn | Pandora
Knoontime Knitting: Blog | Facebook | Twitter | Ravelry
Noon and Wilder links: Blog | Website | Facebook
Noon and Wilder links: Blog | Website | Facebook
The Writer Zen Garden: The Writers Retreat Blog | Forum | Facebook | Twitter
Team Blogs: Nightlight | Nightlight FB Page | Beyond the Veil | BtV FB Page | LGBT Fantasy Fans and Writers | LGBTFFW FB Page
Publishers: Samhain Publishing | Torquere Press
Check out BURNING BRIGHT, available from Samhain Publishing.
Check out EMERALD FIRE, available from Torquere Books.
Publishers: Samhain Publishing | Torquere Press
Check out BURNING BRIGHT, available from Samhain Publishing.
Check out EMERALD FIRE, available from Torquere Books.
Check out "Taking a Chance", part of the Charity Sips 2012 to benefit NOH8, available from Torquere Books.
Watch for TIGER TIGER, coming July, 2013, from Samhain Publishing.
05 May 2013
Calling all Gamers! And Writers! And Readers!
For over a decade the Wookie and I have been attending the Origins Game Fair in Columbus OH in the summer. The date usually coincides with our wedding anniversary so it's a great way for us to celebrate both our love for each other and have a faboo time with other people who enjoy the same things we do - mostly games!
Recently the convention expanded to include a literary track (The Library) with some great authors not only offering panels and seminars, but also available in the Dealers' Room to sell and autograph their books!
... and yes, I iz one! I'll be there with signed copies of "Blaze of Glory", "Heroes Without, Monsters Within" and LIMITED edition copies of "Blood of the Pride" along with discount coupons for ebooks!
This year the theme is Superheroes! And not only are there going to be panels dedicated to discussing superheroes but there's also going to be a limited-run short story anthology with such great authors as Michael Stackpole and Timothy Zahn adding their short stories to the rest of ours.
Me? I've contributed "By The Seat of Your Pants", a pre-"Blaze of Glory" story dealing with Jo Tanis before the disaster that changed her life forever.
Here's a short excerpt:
The rules said that all civilians had to be evacuated from
the performance area. The police swept it clean, based on a tip that there'd be
some sort of superhero face-off happening in the area. There wasn't supposed to
be anyone around to get caught in the brawl, letting us grind out the routine
without any distractions or worrying about collateral damage.
All of which did nothing to explain the eight-year old boy
staring up at me as I hovered a few feet above the ground, waiting for my cue.
He wore a light blue dress shirt and black pants, obviously on his way to or
from some event with his family. How he'd gotten away from them and slipped
through the police barricade was a mystery and one I really didn't have the
time to solve.
"Damn," I whispered into my link.
"What's up?" Mike, my Guardian/sidekick/captor replied,
sounding like he was standing next to me and not a half-block away. The
choreography set-up had Mike coming in for backup after our first confrontation
with the super villain. After all, he wasn't the main draw.
I was. Surf, the fabulous flying super who could warp
electromagnetic fields to her will.
I’m also the one who made a darned hot pinup poster babe,
despite my constant complaining that I didn't want to be portrayed like that.
The Agency called the shots and they loved the income from the posters.
"Hi there," I said to the youngster. "Where's
your mom and dad?" I tried to ignore the blinking red light on a camera
sitting atop the light post. In two minutes we’d be live and on the air,
broadcasting around the world. Right on cue I'd flown in expecting to be
confronting a super villain in a few minutes and brawling in the streets for
millions of eager viewers who loved to see the good guys win.
Instead I was playing babysitter to a wide-eyed kid who
didn't know he'd stolen the scene and we were running out of time.
The dark-haired boy clutched a Metal Mike action figure to
his chest, sizing me up. The battered robot had been well-loved, the metallic
paint worn off his arms and legs. He scowled at me, the tiny face scrunching up
into an annoyed glare.
I obviously wasn't his super of choice.
"Where are your parents?" I asked again.
"Away." His eyes were wide as he watched me.
"Woman, we're going to be active in two minutes,"
Mike said over the link. "Get rid of the kid—can't be putting him in the
line of fire."
"You need to go into there." I pointed at a nearby
store. "I'll go find someone to come and take care of you."
I couldn't tell the kid we were about to play out a
choreographed fight; villain on hero with the outcome already decided. We were
the good guys and we always won.
Always.
The moppet looked at the empty grocery store with a puzzled
expression before turning back to me. "I can't go in there."
"Why?" I could hear the imaginary clock ticking
away. In a minute Wild Billy Bully was coming around that corner tossing cars
left and right as he came at me. The Agency could call him off but it'd be
problematic. We'd already trained for two weeks for this televised brawl and
rescheduling it would be a hassle.
"My mom told me to never go anywhere without an
a-adult." He stuttered on the last word. "She'll be mad at me."
I bit back the obvious question—how had he gotten here
without an adult in the first place?
"Jo—do something," Mike growled in my ear. I
imagined him on the other line with the Agency reps, running through possible
scenarios to get the kid out of the way without making it too obvious. Calling
the show off wasn't an option. I didn't have the authority; neither did Mike.
The Agency could but it was pretty plain with every passing minute they weren't
about to exercise that right.
Even so, the Agency prided itself on never having a civilian
die at one of their fights.
Right now that record weighed heavy on my shoulders.
There's only going to be a few hundred copies of this anthology printed so if you're not going to Origins you'll be able to purchase it online after the convention - but not for long!
If you're going to be in the Columbus area from June 12-16th consider dropping by the Convention Center and meeting some fabulous gamer folk - and some faboo authors as well! The seminars are going to be great - including mine listed below!
2013 Seminar Descriptions
Thursday:
11am – Crafting the Love Scene:
Regardless of the genre you write in, chances are you’ll put a love-interest in
it. How do you blend a touch of romance into your story, and how explicit
should you be? Learn how romance can strengthen your story and make your
characters more real and interesting.
Noon – Superheroes and Sidekicks:
Superheroes, sidekicks, and villians--their stories have been told for years.
How can you use these tropes in your fiction, make them fresh, and oh, yeah,
make them fun?
Saturday:
11am – Writing the Trilogy: Is
there more to your story than can fit into one book? Or is it the other way
around—do you have too much material for your tale and need to cut a few
hundred pages? Our panelists will tackle trilogies and open-ended series,
including how to approach writing the multi-part saga and how to market it.
Sunday:
11am – To Market, To Market: You've
written either a short story or a novel. You've run it through your writing
group and you've polished it. Now what? We tell you how to find the markets to
sell your work.
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